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perfectflaw
04-19-2007, 03:21 PM
hmmnnn, i havent posted for a while.....

i have two new songs, Collide by Howie Day and You Can Hear It By Jay Chou, but...in opposite languages...O_o

I wrote a chinese version for Collide and my friend wrote an english version for the Jay Chou Song. They're not that great singing wise, but i wanted to sing it cause i didn't want the lyrics to go to waste, lols

Okay, first, Collide

The original was by Howie Day, and this is my chinese version (lyrics are kinda...@_@) The singing is so bleh for this one, but i would really like it if any GUYS would sing this for me since it IS a guy song...lols

:sweat: (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=396634&songID=5255005)
不在

站在這路口
看着你背後
你說你要走
讓我不懂該怎說

沒有人發覺
我躲在這裡
腦袋裏全都是我們 度過的一切

就算我已被你打敗
就算你選擇要離開
就算我捨不得goodbye
那又怎樣,你還是不在

回憶到從前
我想念你的擁抱
我開始忍不住讓這些眼淚流

就算我已被你打敗
就算我捨不得goodbye
就算我習慣你不在
不變的是我對你的愛

Oh no no,
我捨不得
讓你離開

就算我已被你打敗
就算你選擇要離開
就算我捨不得goodbye
那又怎樣,你還是不在

那又怎樣,你還是不在

不變的是我對你的愛



Next, the Jay Chou song. My friend, Ivan wrote the english lyrics, and i dunno where i placed it, but it's more understandable than the chinese version of collide, lols


(http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=396634&songID=5254996)
:baka: (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=396634&songID=5254996)


Baby I don’t know what’s wrong
I don’t know what’s going on
I can’t sleep and I can’t eat
I could hardly even breathe

Want to tell you everything
So I’d be free of the pain
Tell you all that’s in my heart
I don’t know where to start

I wish I could just open my mouth and let it out
Some things are easier said than done
And I can’t choose whether to stay or run

Sometimes I feel like you know what I want to say
But then when I open my mouth
Those words just don’t seem to come out

Chorus:
**I want to tell you I love you
But that’s one thing I can’t do
I want to tell you how I feel
And that all I feel is you

But somehow I think you know
But you just won’t let it show
I can’t seem to figure it out,
How you can hear it now**

Million reasons why
We are perfect you and I
But if you still feel unsure
I can find a million more



But I still can’t let you know
Better keep it on the low
It’ the best for you and me
This is how it should be

I can’t figure out why and how this is so hard
But no matter what I will do
You know that I care about you

**I want to tell you I love you
But that’s one thing I can’t do
I want to tell you how I feel
And that all I feel is you

But somehow I think you know
But you just won’t let it show
I can’t seem to figure it out,
How you can hear it now**

I want to tell you I love you
That all my feelings are true
And that everything I will do
I’d do it all for you

shortii
04-19-2007, 04:28 PM
first! oOh support tenshi :]

yandje
04-21-2007, 03:49 AM
Collide

ooh i like the intro! i luv hte guitarrintro ~~~~~
when u started to sing it was offtune .. i think the song is too low for u?
when u came to the 就算 parts it became better!
i luv ur attitutes in songs~~
support u

perfectflaw
04-21-2007, 04:12 PM
@shortii: lol, thanks for the support tiff

@yandje: yeah the song is sooo low >___< that's why i wanted a guy to sing it, but no one volunteered to sing it for me yet T___T

kdotc
04-21-2007, 04:14 PM
u rote the song???

perfectflaw
04-21-2007, 05:03 PM
i wrote my own chinese lyrics, and then my friend wrote his own english lyrics...we didn't compose the song >_>

simply_dreaming
04-22-2007, 09:43 AM
ooo! that's what u were asking me about haha... so cool XD... listen sin

for the collide, i agree with yandje in the beginning was too low, maybe u could've raised the pitch =P...

i like the jay chou one =D the key matches u more...

both lyrics for both songs are major cute and good =) keep it up! u will become a good lyricist (?)... XP

perfectflaw
04-22-2007, 05:50 PM
hahah yeah, that's why. i was editing the lyrics and i got up to that part and i was like, hmmmn something doesnt seem right at that point, let me ask someone who knows chinese!!! lols.

lyricist...i dont know about that, i can't write anything in english, they all come out crappy and with chinese, i dont know enough chinese to make it sound meaningful. All my lyrics up to date are pretty shallow and mainly "oh man, he doesn't love me back, darn it! now i'm gonna wallow in self pity!!" hahaha >___>

i liked my friend's lyrics though, he's also writing another version of simple love which is pretty cute. I'm gonna sing that one soon, lols