Raymond Lam (林峯) - 愛不夠

[kev311]

sup sup!

:wave: :wave: :wave:

wanted to do this for ages. HAHHA its raymond lam's "love is not enough". hope you all like it!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=915228&songID=7436199 (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=915228&songID=7436199)

more importantly, tell me what you think about it! constructive criticisms especially welcome! it helps me improve!

kev311

[SwEeTy_g]

ooooooooooh :blblove: RAYMonds Songs!!!:blblove:
I think it was mentioned b4 about your mic :D So yeah.
I dunno if its the mixing but its not onsync + vocal & bgmusic doesn't equal. Mixing is also important skill :D

About your singing, nice emotion I really like it but the high notes are not so flowing and try to relax?? it sounds lil bit like forcing the notes out. The rest is ok!!! Keep it up!!!
andaa I dunno constructive criticisms. Just telling what I think :hehe:

[princess_bb]

suppport supporrt sin

[hungrydragon]

haha lol i requested this a long time ago .. yay ^^ , i thought it was good!! good joob!

hmm the part where u say "bat sui jan jing yong yau" sounds a lil off? & some parts was kinda loud lol *_*

[kev311]

damn...yesterday i made a comment to kickstart the comments naming what i did bad...and now its gone!!!...but yeh, im gonna self-analyse..

1. music too soft. voice was too loud proportionate to music...
2. the style of singing was pretty much copied...ie. i think i copied raymonds style too much...
3. yeh, was kinda off the music some of the time...thats bad.

there are others...= =" LOL

but thanks for the comments! will definitely keep them in mind for next song!

[jaee]

oh wow.. at parts you kind of sound like raymond lam. :D
mixing needs work... the outcome of a song is half singing/half mixing..:P
your vocals don't really blend with the music.. so it seems like your vocals are separate from the music rather than with the music.
the singing is good though.. just the parts where you sing with more strength are too loud.. which is where mixing would come in handy. lol
I think the transition to and from falsetto can be smoother.. it's a little rough.. or you're holding back too much. :)
the sync can be a bit better too.. you're a little slow most of the time.
overall, it's nice. hehe but i hear this song every time my phone rings.. hahahah